Count Fosco: Wilkie Collins’s Villain in “The Woman in White”

Technique

In The Woman in White, Wilkie Collins introduces Count Fosco as a villain with a detailed description of his unsightly qualities, ensuring that readers immediately start to dislike Fosco.

The above excerpt leads with the narrator unable to explain how Count Fosco has captured the imagination. The narrator builds up the inexplicable aura of Fosco by describing the feelings he generates, which creates an air of uncertainty and makes the reader curious as to why and who is Count Fosco.

Next, the narrator describes Fosco’s oversized appearance, which was a common trope for the time, hence the narrator’s dislike for “corpulent humanity.” The narrator piles the criticism of Fosco’s appearance by comparing it to oversized and disliked historical figures, such as Napoleon, who gained weight as he aged.

The narrator continues judging Fosco’s appearance by zooming into his facial appearance, specifically the following:

  • Eyes: “Cold” and “grey”
  • Complexion: “Sallow” (sickly)
  • Hair: “Wig”
  • Face: “Smoother and freer from all marks and wrinkles” despite his 60 years of age
  • Speech: His unusually strong command of language and localized accent despite his foreign identity

The qualities leave an impression of a dark figure who is not all he seems at first glance. Fosco’s sensitivity and quiet feet (despite his size) are also mentioned, which contradict his other qualities and further raise suspicion.

Use

  • The key to introducing a villain is layering details consistent with the character’s portrayal. They must all come together in the end so the reader can accurately judge and understand the character. Focus on layering the description and then making the character have actions that correspond to the description, which reinforces the character and the reader’s understanding.